NEW RELEASE - Forbidden Stowaway - Arabella Sheen

And here it is! 

The long-awaited Forbidden Stowaway by Arabella Sheen  

#historical #romance

Looking for a thrilling and captivating historical romance? Then look no further than "Forbidden Stowaway," a story that will take you on a journey of love, sacrifice, and redemption.
Meet Olivia, a woman who has burnt her bridges and must face the consequences of her actions.

When she sets foot on board Captain Luke Crowe’s merchant ship, she knows that her reputation in elite society is in jeopardy. But when she is faced with the choice of saving her brother or saving her good name, she knows what she has to do, even if it means surrendering her innocence to Luke.

Join Olivia as she embarks on a journey of illicit discovery with Luke, a man who will challenge her in ways she never thought possible.
Will Olivia's love for her family be enough to outweigh the sacrifices she must make for them? Or will she lose everything she holds dear in pursuit of what she desires?

With rich historical detail and passionate storytelling, "Forbidden Stowaway" is a tale that will capture your heart and leave you breathless. Don't miss out on this unforgettable romance.

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Tips on Editing a Novel - Arabella Sheen

  

Editing a first draft of a romance novel can be a challenging process, but it's an essential step to polish your writing and ensure your story is engaging for your readers. Here are some things to look for when editing your first draft:

 1. Character Development: Check if your characters are well-rounded and have distinct personalities that drive the story forward. Make sure your main characters have clear goals, motivations, and conflicts that create tension and keep readers interested.

2. Dialogue: Make sure your dialogue sounds natural and authentic to the characters. Check for unnecessary repetition, excessive exposition, and monologues that slow down the pace of the story. Also, ensure that the dialogue is consistent with the characters' personalities, backgrounds, and emotions.

3. Settings and Descriptions: Check that your settings and descriptions create a vivid and immersive world for your readers. Make sure the descriptions are concise, sensory, and relevant to the story. Avoid overloading the readers with too much detail or too many adjectives.    

4. Plot and Pacing: Check if your plot is well-structured and flows smoothly. Ensure that the pacing is appropriate for the genre and keeps the reader engaged. Check for plot holes, inconsistencies, and unnecessary scenes that don't contribute to the story. 

5. Emotions: Make sure you show the emotions of your characters and allow the reader to experience them through their senses. Use body language, internal thoughts, and dialogue to convey the characters' emotions without telling the reader how they should feel.

6. Theme and Message: Check if your story has a clear theme or message that resonates with your readers. Ensure that your characters' experiences and actions reflect the theme and reinforce the message.

Overall, editing the first draft of a romantic novel requires attention to detail, patience, and a willingness to revise and improve your writing. By focusing on these elements, you can create a compelling and engaging story that resonates with your readers.